Monday, 23 May 2016



We've been learning the difference between nouns, verbs and adjectives. We've also been learning when and how to use them in our writing. The following is a piece of writing by Timothy based on the pictures below.


The Surfer

One day a man was relaxing on the warm soft sand when he saw big waves and surfers. He started to paddle in the blue ocean. He was smiling as he was surfing in the rough sea. All of a sudden he was struggling to balance and his black  hair got wavy. He fell off his long board with a big splash. Then he screamed for help as he drowned in the water.

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