The children of Room 11 have written 'Holiday Stories' and decorated the stories with some crayon and dye artwork. Then Miss O published the stories and we made it into our very own book
for the class library.
The Class Writing Goal was to use different sentence starters
(instead of the usual 'In the holidays I ... !!')
I think they did well, check them out ...
“MMMmmmmm”
I said. In front of me is a yummy pizza. Oh! I thought, it is a pepperoni
pizza! My favourite kind! Then I ate the crispy pizza … Crunch! Crunch! Crunch!
I said to my parents “MMMmmmm, yummy in my tummy!
I love
pizza.
Author:
Maeve
Yay! In
the holidays, I went to the Circus. At the Circus there was the world’s biggest
cannon! A man is going in the big cannon and he’s going to be shot into the
air! So, they start the cannon by pushing some buttons and he’s up and away!
Thankfully, he landed on a soft safety trampoline.
There
were motorbikes as well. There were four of them and they were going very fast
inside a globe.
But my
favourite Circus act is a Clown that didn’t talk. He just used a whistle!
It was
fun going to the Circus!
Author:
Talia
On
Thursday me and my family went to a Motel. We swam in the pool. We stayed there
for four and a half days! We came back yesterday and it took us four hours to
get home.
Author:
Tyson
In the
holidays I went to Minecraft World. I built a house and I have some T’n’T in my
hand. I make a portal to go to the real Minecraft.
Author:
Wilson
It was my
birthday in the holidays!
(I turned
9). It was so cool!! I got $15 and I brought a rubbish truck. My truck has a
lever and when you push the lever the arms come up. There are also buttons on
the truck.
I really
like it.
Author:
Josiah
I went to
A+ in the holidays. We made a polar bear, a snow globe and a snow flake. We
decorated them with glitter and shaving cream.
Author:
Inge
On the
second day of the holidays, my Aunty came over with my baby brother. My baby
brothers name is Samuel. Samuel is so cute and funny; he is also very playful.
The funniest moment was when my Grandma was massaging my baby brother … he peed
on her!!!!
Author:
Ronak
“WAAAAaaaahhhhh!!”
… my baby sister has just bitten down on a hard plastic Duplo giraffe and hurt
her gums! She thought it was Sophie the giraffe. Sophie is a teether which is
something that babies chew on. My Mum found Sophie and gave it to my sister.
Then she told my Uncle off for giving her the wrong giraffe!!
Author:
Gabriel
“Happy
Birthday Brax and Tama” I said to my baby brothers. Guess what they said!? “I
don’t like my presents … I love them!” and “I am four, YAY!”
But,
that’s not all … we went to CHIPMUNKS! There was a girl there that kissed me
and my brothers … she was a bit strange!
Author:
Anahera
My
friends came to my house in the holidays. When they were here they played with
my toys. After that, I had dinner and went to sleep.
Author:
Jojo
One Sunday
my Mum, Dad and I went shopping. They had ice-cream but the shop didn’t Rocky
Road, which is the one that I like. “NNOooooo, they don’t have my favourite
flavour!!” I said. Then I saw Jaw Breakers. There were 6 for 60c so I bought
them! Different colours had different flavours. Every time you suck them the
sugary layer comes off and then you get a different layer and a different
colour!
Author:
Carter
On
Saturday me and my brother stayed at home. We played on my Dad’s computer. We
played Sumdog. My brother played ‘Tower Climbing’. Benson was trying to beat
Grace L. Pow!! Benson and Grace L tied the game. We didn’t earn any coins.
After
that my brother tried to freak me out by saying “BOO!”
Author: Johnson
BANG! The
ball hit all the pins over!! Then the pins all went down a big hole. Me and my
cousins went bowling in the holidays at Extreme. Everyone had some food (Hot
chips, nuggets) and drinks (Frozen drinks and juice). My Aunty got 53, my
brother got 80 and I got 99 … so I WON!!
Author:
Levi
I was so
happy because we went out to the movies today. I looked out the window and saw
that it is a beautiful, sunny day. Mum, my sister and I walked to the movie
theatre from our house. Mum bought us some chewy lollies to eat. They were
delicious.
When we
went into the movie I noticed it was very dark but the screen was really
bright. There were lots and lots of seats and then I could hear the adverts
before the movie playing really loud.
We found
a good seat and we were all very excited to see the movie. It was ‘Despicable
Me 3’. The movie was really funny and my favourite character was Dru (Gru’s
twin brother).
The day
was great.
Author:
Jaedah (Recrafted with Miss O)
One sunny
morning, me and my friends went to the playground. We played hide and seek. My
friend couldn’t find me! Then I said “I’m here” and then she found me J
Author:
Amy
Yesterday
it was sunny. I went to the haircut shop by the Glenfield mall. After that I
saw the Haircut Man! The Haircut Man said “What would you like today?” I said
“A star haircut!” He said “OK”
After
that I showed it to my Mum and she said “That’s cool!”
Author:
Shion
The
kangaroo was running in the sand. He was running to meet his friends. All his
kangaroo friends were going to run too. The white birds watched the kangaroos
run.
Author:
Pyeong Kang
Yippee!!
My Grandmother has come from Australia for a holiday and she has given us
presents!! They are from our cousins. They gave me a pencil case which is very
fruity and the rubbers smell like fruit as well. Also my brother got a remote
control car and it goes really fast!
My Granny
is called Granny Savy and she is really nice. I also got a white fluffy coat
which is very cozy. When she came from the airport she cuddled me tight. I love
my Grandmother.
Author: Elizabeth
In the
last week of the holidays, some of my cats went over to my next door neighbours
house and they fought with the dog. One of them died and now I only have 7
cats, and one with a cut ear.
Author:
Cody
When I
was going to my sister’s Birthday, I did not see my sister because she was
hiding from me. When I turned around I saw that she was right behind me! After
that my sister cut her Birthday cake.
Author:
Tioti
My Nana
saw the things that I was drawing. They are FNAF puppets. There are 5 of them.
The first one is Bonnie from FNAF 5. The next one is Toy Chika. She is the only
girl. The one after that is Nightmare Fred Bear. The second to last is Toy Freddy
and he can speak into his microphone. Lucky last is Withered Bonnie and he
doesn’t have a face! It was fun drawing them.
Author:
Hannah
Author:
Chelsea
“Yay” I
say … It’s my age! I have just realised something. I have 2 cats - one is 3
years old and the other one is four years old! If you put them together, it
makes 7 … and I am 7 years old!!
Author:
Rico
Lovely stories
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